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Aurelia Navarro's avatar

Hmmmm - interesting, but I feel as if I missed an important beat …

R.S.T.'s avatar

I do apologize. Did you ever hear of the expression an old soul. I often wondered how if there are old souls where do the new ones comes from. As like if one can be born into an old soul then where does a brand new one originate. This is just an interpretation on that premise.

So they meet halfway feeling like they've known each other all along ( old souls ) they speak of a family …sadly they die before this happens….their love endures through death and their two old souls created a new one.

Aurelia Navarro's avatar

Yep, definitely love you! 🥰💋🥰

R.S.T.'s avatar

Haha Im blushing…thank you Aurelia.

Ginny Lynns (Remembring2Laugh)'s avatar

How come you dont let us pay sub to you? Or even donate to buy a coffee.

Aaliya's avatar

I love how the story flows without needing names or details, yet feels complete.

That ending gave me chills gentle, profound, and strangely comforting.

R.S.T.'s avatar

Thank you Aaliya. I am happy that you enjoyed it.

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

Recognition, without anything to attach it to.

R.S.T.'s avatar

Thank you for reading Antonio.

Justin Hewitt's avatar

I loved reading this, it was beautifully crafted. I thought of the person I’ve experienced that with and it brought a bittersweet smile to my face. Thank you

20th Century Fox's avatar

What a beautiful piece

R.S.T.'s avatar

Thank you.