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Eleora McConnell's avatar

This speaks to me more than you could have known. It is mixture of a cautionary tale and a fable. I love the theme, restraint in prose and the rhythmic beating of each stanza. Thank you for this gift as I settle into attempted slumber. Magical, revealing and I want more! ✨🤗✨

R.S.T.'s avatar

Thank you very much for reading, you are appreciated.

Eleora McConnell's avatar

Gratitude and it’s my honour. 🫶🏼

Hey Mom's avatar

I grew up in the forest. It can be very mysterious.

The rhythm of your story had me paralyzed to the end.

R.S.T.'s avatar

Thank you so much for reading. I am happy that you enjoyed it.

Hina Gondal's avatar

This is beautiful

R.S.T.'s avatar

Thank you very much for reading.

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

When the edge goes,

nothing warns us anymore.

R.S.T.'s avatar

It is true my friend, and it is sad.

Thank you reading Antonio.